You did a good a very good job in the emotion. Which make me wonder... how do you know what all that feels like???
She could've seen it happen. But, it was a great poem anyway. A lot of poems I've seen have been emotional or sad.
What you did with your poem is very interesting. You were able to have an emotional poem and you were able to implement nonsense words in to it. I also liked the background you chose, great blog!
I commented on Gustavo's, Marisa's, and Isabelle R's blogs.
I liked how in your poem you added emotion. You added your feeling and how you feel sometimes. What about the light in the poem?
You did a good a very good job in the emotion. Which make me wonder... how do you know what all that feels like???
ReplyDeleteShe could've seen it happen. But, it was a great poem anyway. A lot of poems I've seen have been emotional or sad.
ReplyDeleteWhat you did with your poem is very interesting. You were able to have an emotional poem and you were able to implement nonsense words in to it. I also liked the background you chose, great blog!
ReplyDeleteI commented on Gustavo's, Marisa's, and Isabelle R's blogs.
ReplyDeleteI liked how in your poem you added emotion. You added your feeling and how you feel sometimes. What about the light in the poem?
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