I liked this poem because it showed your opinion on where you were from instead of just a brief overview like some people out in their poems. You put emphasis on the where part of where I'm from and I thought that made your poem fun to read. You had a longer poem than most people, but you made it interesting enough to keep my attention. The different perspective (because this was not written about Berwyn) made your poem stand out.
I liked this poem because it showed your opinion on where you were from instead of just a brief overview like some people out in their poems. You put emphasis on the where part of where I'm from and I thought that made your poem fun to read. You had a longer poem than most people, but you made it interesting enough to keep my attention. The different perspective (because this was not written about Berwyn) made your poem stand out.
ReplyDeleteDo you think you will go back to Chicago when you move out of your parents' house?
ReplyDeleteYou wrote very differently than how you talk. You show your interests and write it in a way that pulls a reader in, showing your emotion.
ReplyDeleteImpressive blog! Your use of imagery, figurative language, and repetition of ideas is very mature.
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